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Old 04-14-2007, 08:29 AM
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A Poem That I Wrote

Although my perception has changed on my HP has changed. This is really good!


I once had a friend who treated me right
She said that she loved me but we would fight

At first we had a very special thing
With laughter, love, and a diamond ring

She made me feel as if I was a man
Then she looked again and she ran

She ran her blood into my vain
She started to take away all my pain

But when after awhile she would leave
I would have too pull up my sleeve

To find her once again in me
But she wouldn't set me free

She took control of the life that we had
The blood thickened and turned bad

Why did you turn on me so much
You were with me dinner, breakfast, and lunch

Although you would be my main course
You became my only source

Chrystal don't you still love me a little bit
Why did you have to make me feel like sh*t

Did you come to destroy my life
You took away my children and my wife

You promised that we would never end
You said my life would be only love send

But yet you turned you back on me
You brought heartache and cut down my tree

You said that I was your only one
But yet your trickery took my son

You said that no matter what would be
That you would always be good to me

Now you have me with heart and soul
You keep me on the miserable roll

Why can't you just go your way
And leave this world not tomorrow but today

Why did you turn so very bad
At first you made me so very glad

Can't you see how you have lied to him
You have kept them living in sin

You have taken a lot of things
So now I must take back that diamond ring

I have the power through my LORD today
To put you to rest and make you lay

But yet I hear your voice inside
Saying Babe Babe just one more ride

But yet one is too many and a thousand in never enough
You always did like playing ruff

So now I have a choice to make
I will throw the ring into the lake

The lake of death is in your life
No longer will I have you as wife

So thanks for the adventure down this lane
I hope to God that you never rain

For now you know how very real it feels
That love like that will actually kill

So now you have lost you power over me
For today my Lord has set me free
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Old 04-14-2007, 09:58 AM
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Chance,

What a wonderful description of the message of hope. And...the perils of dancing with the beautiful, high-heeled Siren.
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Old 04-14-2007, 10:03 AM
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Vic....

That is awesome my friend!!!!

~HUGS!~ Liss
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Old 04-14-2007, 01:07 PM
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This is great Vic!
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Old 07-11-2007, 07:37 PM
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Old 07-11-2007, 08:19 PM
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Wonderful message there.

Thank you for sharing that with us.

Blessings to you, my friend.

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Old 07-12-2007, 02:31 AM
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Made me cry..made me cry my friend..

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Yikes....gave me the chills
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Old 07-12-2007, 07:44 PM
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How are you Chance???
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Old 07-12-2007, 08:10 PM
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What a gift! I think I heard you say before that you like to write poetry. I would love to read more of yours. I am almost never in Newcomers, so would you clue me in so I don't miss such a gift?
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God I really miss some of these people
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A lot of them are still around Vic
How you doin'?

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Vic, I saw your name and stopped by to give you a big hug.

Stick around, you have many friends here who have never forgotten you. You have been in my prayers.

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wow. nice poem
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Old 01-14-2010, 07:30 AM
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Hi Vic,

I'm so glad to see you back here!
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Wow...I just noticed the original date on this.

Love the poem!
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Thinking good thoughts for you bro!! Good to see you stop by. Take care.
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