A Poem That I Wrote Although my perception has changed on my HP has changed. This is really good! I once had a friend who treated me right She said that she loved me but we would fight At first we had a very special thing With laughter, love, and a diamond ring She made me feel as if I was a man Then she looked again and she ran She ran her blood into my vain She started to take away all my pain But when after awhile she would leave I would have too pull up my sleeve To find her once again in me But she wouldn't set me free She took control of the life that we had The blood thickened and turned bad Why did you turn on me so much You were with me dinner, breakfast, and lunch Although you would be my main course You became my only source Chrystal don't you still love me a little bit Why did you have to make me feel like sh*t Did you come to destroy my life You took away my children and my wife You promised that we would never end You said my life would be only love send But yet you turned you back on me You brought heartache and cut down my tree You said that I was your only one But yet your trickery took my son You said that no matter what would be That you would always be good to me Now you have me with heart and soul You keep me on the miserable roll Why can't you just go your way And leave this world not tomorrow but today Why did you turn so very bad At first you made me so very glad Can't you see how you have lied to him You have kept them living in sin You have taken a lot of things So now I must take back that diamond ring I have the power through my LORD today To put you to rest and make you lay But yet I hear your voice inside Saying Babe Babe just one more ride But yet one is too many and a thousand in never enough You always did like playing ruff So now I have a choice to make I will throw the ring into the lake The lake of death is in your life No longer will I have you as wife So thanks for the adventure down this lane I hope to God that you never rain For now you know how very real it feels That love like that will actually kill So now you have lost you power over me For today my Lord has set me free |
Chance, What a wonderful description of the message of hope. And...the perils of dancing with the beautiful, high-heeled Siren. |
:Val004: Vic.... That is awesome my friend!!!! ~HUGS!~ Liss |
This is great Vic! |
Thanks |
Wonderful message there. Thank you for sharing that with us. Blessings to you, my friend. BHJ |
Made me cry..made me cry my friend.. Love, Sherry |
Yikes....gave me the chills |
How are you Chance??? |
What a gift! I think I heard you say before that you like to write poetry. I would love to read more of yours. I am almost never in Newcomers, so would you clue me in so I don't miss such a gift? |
God I really miss some of these people |
A lot of them are still around Vic :) How you doin'? D |
Vic, I saw your name and stopped by to give you a big hug. Stick around, you have many friends here who have never forgotten you. You have been in my prayers. Hugs |
wow. nice poem |
Hi Vic, I'm so glad to see you back here! |
Wow...I just noticed the original date on this. Love the poem! |
Thinking good thoughts for you bro!! Good to see you stop by. Take care. |
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