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Old 05-20-2012, 02:34 PM
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Haiku - Day One

I will write one haiku every day during my first 90 days of sobriety.
(this one is a true story)


Six bars in two hours
On a wave of ecstasy
The car is totaled


Everyone write a haiku!

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
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Old 05-20-2012, 03:17 PM
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Went to the dancing
But instead of romancing
Just blackouts n tears
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Rebellion, Last Call
From Depths of Despair, Awake
Steel Eyes Focused Today
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opened the truck door
searched desprately on the floor
where is my vodka!!!!!
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what a fabulous idea! i just finished 30 and am really struggling. i'm going to try it. thanx for sharing this.

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seems uphill today
how many chances are there
time to go for it
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Old 05-20-2012, 06:53 PM
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I now have no doubt
No matter how bad the day
Drinking makes it worse
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Old 05-20-2012, 07:09 PM
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One day it hit me
Why put sobriety off?
Life is there, waiting
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I'm weak- you are strong
I possess all your evils
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Fearful of dying
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This thread makes me think
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Old 05-21-2012, 07:54 AM
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With a sober mind
I have all the same problems
But one less to solve
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Feeling good today
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writing poetry
on day one, you will be fine
just don't drink today
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I could not go on
I could only surrender
A new day dawning
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surrender to win
makes absolutely no sense
until you try it
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These are great!! Recovery haiku - wonderful!
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God, seriously?
a drunk, not an idiot
then the fear comes back
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