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Old 06-19-2005, 04:07 PM
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Higher Power Has The Power/poem



I once had a friend who treated me right
She said that she loved me but we would fight

At first we had a very special thing
With laughter, love, and a diamond ring

She made me feel as if I was a man
Then she looked again and she ran

She ran her blood into my vains
She started to take away all my pain

But when after awhile she would leave
I would have too pull up my sleave

To find her once agian in me
But she wouldn't set me free

She took control of the life that we had
The blood thickened and turned bad

Why did you turn on me so much
Youwere with me dinner, breakfast, and lunch

Although you would be my main course
You became my only source

Chrystal don't you still love me a little bit
Why did you have to make me feel like sh*t

Did you come to destrou my life
You took away my children and my wife

You promised that we would never end
You said my life would be only love send

But yet you turned you back on me
You brought heartache and cut down my tree

You said that I was your only one
But yet your trickery took my son

You said taht no matter what whould be
That you would always be good to me

Now you have me with heart and soul
You keep me on the miserable roll

Why can't you just go your way
And leave this world not tomorrow but today

Why did you turn so very bad
At first you made me so very glad

Can't you see how you have lied to him
You have kept them living in sin

You have taken a lot of things
So now I must take back that diamond ring

I have the power throught my LORD today
To put you to rest and make you lay

But yet I hear your voice inside
Saying Babe Babe just one more ride

But yet one is too many and a thousand in never enough
You always did like playing ruff

So now I have a choice to make
I will throw the ring into the lake

The lake of death is in your life
No longer will I have you as wife

So thanks for the adventure down this lane
I hope to God that you never raine

For now you know how very real it feels
That love like that will actually kill

So now you have lost you power over me
For today my Lord has set me free


Written by: Victor Watts [email protected]
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Old 06-19-2005, 08:07 PM
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Thank you for posting this...makes me realise that we don't have to give up,we can fight the addiction and if we really want to we can be so much stronger than she is!
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Old 06-20-2005, 02:51 AM
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Nice Poem.My Lord has set me free.
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Old 06-20-2005, 04:34 AM
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Great peom Lucky.
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Old 06-20-2005, 07:53 AM
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Thanks guys I just don't now they are my thoughts and that is how they come out< I am not sure what to do with all of them that I have but a lot of people think that I should find some sort of publisher and make good use of them but I figure that it might help someone out here to relate at what it was like what happened and what it is like now thanks for taking the time to read it I know it was LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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Old 06-21-2005, 11:12 PM
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Old 09-17-2005, 09:23 PM
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One more time threw LOL
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Old 09-18-2005, 03:38 PM
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hey i loved it. i write poetry too, maybe ill post one someday
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