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Old 12-07-2017, 04:52 AM
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The Other You

Do You remember
That one day
You danced in the sun
When You were little

You felt alive
You spun and spun
You laughed
You were free

Do You remember
That time you smiled
Your heart felt Joy
You knew a sense of peace

You felt the wind
Upon Your face
You felt strong
You were Alive

Do You remember
The times 'before'
The days when You
Hadn't yet

You didn't need
You didn't hide
You didn't escape
You lived

The Other You
Inside Your Heart
Your Soulful Self
Still is there

Beyond the glass
Behind the lies
Beneath the Addicted veil
YOU ARE THERE

Take Your Hand
Let Yourself Stand
Claim Your Freedom
The Other You.... IS YOU

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Old 12-07-2017, 04:58 AM
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Old 12-07-2017, 05:00 AM
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I think it's essential (for anyone, really, as we age, but esp. for US)

to remember who were were

before it went dark.

To dig a tunnel back, if need be,
to the simplest pleasant memories.
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Old 12-07-2017, 05:04 AM
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Originally Posted by FreeOwl View Post
Do You remember
That one day
You danced in the sun
When You were little

You felt alive
You spun and spun
You laughed
You were free

Do You remember
That time you smiled
Your heart felt Joy
You knew a sense of peace

You felt the wind
Upon Your face
You felt strong
You were Alive

Do You remember
The times 'before'
The days when You
Hadn't yet

You didn't need
You didn't hide
You didn't escape
You lived

The Other You
Inside Your Heart
Your Soulful Self
Still is there

Beyond the glass
Behind the lies
Beneath the Addicted veil
YOU ARE THERE

Take Your Hand
Let Yourself Stand
Claim Your Freedom
The Other You.... IS YOU

Did you write that? That’s beautiful. It could apply to a great many situations.
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Old 12-07-2017, 05:05 AM
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thank you. Yes. I wrote it just now.

for all of You.

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Old 12-07-2017, 07:44 AM
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You write stuff like this all the time. You have a real talent.
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Old 12-07-2017, 08:15 AM
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Thank you!
Oh yes, I do remember her and now I'm finding her again!
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Old 12-07-2017, 08:26 AM
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As usual, a great post. Living sober has rewound the clock for me by about 20 years. Both physically and mentally feel like I did when I was young. And so far it is not getting old. I enjoy each day.
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Old 12-07-2017, 02:14 PM
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Thank you, FreeOwl!
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Old 12-07-2017, 02:15 PM
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As usual, a great post. Living sober has rewound the clock for me by about 20 years. Both physically and mentally feel like I did when I was young. And so far it is not getting old. I enjoy each day.
Same for me, Jeff.
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Old 12-07-2017, 02:16 PM
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Originally Posted by FreeOwl View Post
thank you. Yes. I wrote it just now.

for all of You.

, FreeOwl
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