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Old 12-18-2015, 06:01 AM
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Would you like a glass of wine?

I do not want a glass of wine.
A single glass of wine makes my mouth feel dry.

I want 10-
at least 10, but put one aside for last call- just in case.

I do not want a glass of wine

What I want is suicide.
But slow - and from the inside.

My soul will be the first to go.
Then every thing I touch.
Until I can not eat, and starve, and desiccate.

Or, maybe there's enough of me to breath some hope
onto these embers resting in my chest.

Go on, ask me again.
"Would you like a glass of wine?"

I do not want a glass of wine.
Without one I might just be fine.

Wouldn't that be nice.
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Old 12-18-2015, 06:04 AM
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Would you like a glass of wine?

I usually say, "no thank you I'm not drinking today."
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Old 12-18-2015, 06:06 AM
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That's a great poem, did you write that, gega? Thanks for that.
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Old 12-18-2015, 06:09 AM
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That's a great poem, did you write that, gega? Thanks for that.
I wrote it last night. Thanks.
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Old 12-18-2015, 06:11 AM
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Nice poem gega about how you wouldn't like a glass of wine & why I found that excellent
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Old 12-18-2015, 06:14 AM
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I like it!!
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Old 12-18-2015, 06:18 AM
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Originally Posted by gega View Post
I wrote it last night. Thanks.
You captured the desperate hope really well.

Welcome to the site, I hope to 'see' you around.
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