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Old 08-05-2004, 07:36 PM
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another poem, Zach

please lord forgive me for my life of sin,
my hard stares seem to scare all my sisters kids,
just so you know,i dont hang around the house much,this all night money makins got me outta touch,

s*!t, aint flashed a smile in a long while,
i wonder if ill live to ever see my child,
i wonder if god will help me change,
i pray but things always seem the same,

i see my loved ones go six feet deep,
either peacefully or murdered in the street,
i wish god would take me away,
just so i can live to look foward to a bright day,

but i guess thats just the way it goes,
in this cold life noone really seems to know,
i wish i could muffle out the pain,
but what no matter what i do i always feel the same,

i wish god would let me sleep in eternal peace,
so i can smoke a swisher sweet with all my lost peeps,
but i guess that time will come soon enough,
i guess i just have to give it my all and try not to live rough....


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Old 08-05-2004, 07:45 PM
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i guess i just have to give it my all and try not to live rough....
Sounds like a plan Zach. Keep fighting the fight, you can do it. Peace...


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Old 08-05-2004, 08:15 PM
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Old 08-06-2004, 06:17 AM
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Zach,
That's an incredibly insightful poem there. You hit my sweet spot. You've learned a lot through your pain. When you're ready...send us another poem.
 

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