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Old 07-17-2011, 12:24 AM
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Short Poem I wrote about addiction...

I'm not trying to waste forum space, but I was writing someone an email and I was trying to describe how I felt and wrote this without meaning to get all poetic. (Does that make sense?). This is how I feel. Maybe some of you do too.

. I feel like I was on a ship that sunk in the middle of the ocean. I知 the only survivor but nobody knows the ship went down and I知 clinging on to a piece of the decimated vessel. I知 screaming but nobody can hear me. I don稚 know if the passing ships are the friend or enemy. If nobody knows I知 here all alone and I知 running out of time, how will I find the wisdom to find my way home when I don稚 know where home is?

If anyone of you have any poetry about addiction, please do post. Just because I'm clean doesn't mean I'm well.
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Old 07-17-2011, 01:07 AM
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I'm not trying to waste forum space, but I was writing someone an email and I was trying to describe how I felt and wrote this without meaning to get all poetic. (Does that make sense?). This is how I feel. Maybe some of you do too.

. I feel like I was on a ship that sunk in the middle of the ocean. I知 the only survivor but nobody knows the ship went down and I知 clinging on to a piece of the decimated vessel. I知 screaming but nobody can hear me. I don稚 know if the passing ships are the friend or enemy. If nobody knows I知 here all alone and I知 running out of time, how will I find the wisdom to find my way home when I don稚 know where home is?

If anyone of you have any poetry about addiction, please do post. Just because I'm clean doesn't mean I'm well.


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