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Old 05-19-2008, 08:00 AM
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I wrote a little poem about my struggles

I'm feeling alot of cravings today, so I've just scribbled down a little poem to try to keep my mind in focus... Sorry if it doesn't make any sense!

Freedom

I once was in a dungeon
It was a fearful time
The things that chained me to the wall
Were beer and malt and wine

It was a most unhappy place
All sad, and lonely too
I feared that I would stay there, trapped
Until my life was through

But now I am no longer there
I escaped from there, you see;
Life still has its ups and downs
But I'm so glad I'm free

Yet now that I'm no longer there
I must be on my guard
The dungeon master's at the gates
And trying very hard...

To lure me back within his walls
Back to that place I left
Back to the chains that bound me there
All lonely and bereft

He has a tray on which is spread
A host of dainty things
A brandy, gin, and vodka too
A cognac, and a Pimms

But though they look so dainty there
A sting be in their tail
And I don't want to be enslaved
Within that dismal gaol

For I have tasted freedom true
More sublime than I can tell
So I must now just skip along
And wave those drinks farewell
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:06 AM
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"SORRY IF IT DOSEN;T MAKE ANY SENSE"

Wow, Paddington, you're a poet and you don't know it!!
That was lovely, so well written....thank you for sharing
hang in there bea, r
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Old 05-19-2008, 09:16 AM
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thanks for sharing your poem! keep writing and reaching out! hugs, k
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Old 05-19-2008, 09:35 AM
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I enjoyed that poem and can relate to what you have shared. Thanks!
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Old 06-25-2008, 06:07 PM
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Hey Paddington - Could use another one of your poems!
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Old 06-25-2008, 09:19 PM
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Originally Posted by Horselover View Post
Hey Paddington - Could use another one of your poems!
Agreed! Thinking of you Paddington, how are you doing?
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Hey Paddington...


Good to see your back posting...great poem!
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Old 06-26-2008, 05:57 AM
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Thank you for sharing your poem.

It empowered me this morning!
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Old 06-26-2008, 05:59 AM
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This poem is from May of this year. I was hoping Paddington would come back with anothe poem. See Paddington, this poem written a month ago still is touching people. You really do have a talent. Come back - please!!
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Old 06-26-2008, 07:54 AM
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This is going on my fridge, Thank you Paddy-Bear!

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Old 06-26-2008, 08:11 AM
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I loved your poem and will print it out to save and share with people I know.

You have a talent for poems. Thank's for sharing.
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