Hey Eq.
Originally Posted by equus
My presentation stinks, I've been told it's overwhelming, that it's overcomplicated, and that it's threatening.
The words you use to describe what was said to you sounds like it was delivered in an intimidating manner. I venture to guess you didn't further inquire to your superiors any further for more detail, or they didn't offer specifics? Perhaps you could arrange to meet with the individual(s) who passed you this information. Open communication is always a boon in the workplace (even if the comments you posted
didn't originate from there).