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Old 07-20-2006, 01:11 PM
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doorknob
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Thanks PD. Reading it made me realize that I'm a much better writer now than I was then. When I was typing it, I really wanted to edit. I would have used used more discriptive language, and different words for the ones I was repeating, as well as a few more commas, for starters. That was my first year in college. I completed 2 1/2 more years, but fell apart in my senior year (twice).
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