poem (please read)
zach
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Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: sandsprings,oklahoma
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poem (please read)
in a life full of heartbreak and indesisions,
a life full of broken promises and personal prisons,
i wonder sometimes if there is hope for my life,
i was raped at an early age,
i was always seeking something to ease the pain,
at seven i started smokin bud to numb my brain,
but still i always felt the pain,
for a while it worked,aong with all the liquer and coke and crack,
but i wasted my childhood years whick i will never be able to get back,
people cared for me but all i did was push away their open hands,
i always wondered why but at night i would silently sry,
and still i wonder why my closest friends are havin to die,
i thought i was findin a way out of the pain,
living my life so in vain,
kickin it in the hood and smokin the green,
all i wanted was the simple things,
to feel accepted,loved and worthwhile,
very seldim did i ever smile,
even though my high only lasted a while,
even though i wanted to stop,i always wanted more,
but in a sense i just wanted God to open heavens doors,
so i could see all my friends i had lost throughout the years,
seeing them buried six feet deep,
i would always wonder and silently weep,
maybe s**t will get better,in fact i know it will because ive got 8 month clean, and i know that everything happens for a reason,but i still wonder why, and ever since i was a young boy, i would silently cry.....
Zach
a life full of broken promises and personal prisons,
i wonder sometimes if there is hope for my life,
i was raped at an early age,
i was always seeking something to ease the pain,
at seven i started smokin bud to numb my brain,
but still i always felt the pain,
for a while it worked,aong with all the liquer and coke and crack,
but i wasted my childhood years whick i will never be able to get back,
people cared for me but all i did was push away their open hands,
i always wondered why but at night i would silently sry,
and still i wonder why my closest friends are havin to die,
i thought i was findin a way out of the pain,
living my life so in vain,
kickin it in the hood and smokin the green,
all i wanted was the simple things,
to feel accepted,loved and worthwhile,
very seldim did i ever smile,
even though my high only lasted a while,
even though i wanted to stop,i always wanted more,
but in a sense i just wanted God to open heavens doors,
so i could see all my friends i had lost throughout the years,
seeing them buried six feet deep,
i would always wonder and silently weep,
maybe s**t will get better,in fact i know it will because ive got 8 month clean, and i know that everything happens for a reason,but i still wonder why, and ever since i was a young boy, i would silently cry.....
Zach
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: London, United Kindom
Posts: 9
Hi there Zach,
Im pink , new here (kinda) nice to meet u, I thought that was wicked, u do have a real talent, i really appreciate it, i write myself, alot, so i can relate to this poem in many ways, as im sure so many of us can.
Sending..
peace,luv,light,unity and respect
Pink
Keep 'em coming...
Im pink , new here (kinda) nice to meet u, I thought that was wicked, u do have a real talent, i really appreciate it, i write myself, alot, so i can relate to this poem in many ways, as im sure so many of us can.
Sending..
peace,luv,light,unity and respect
Pink
Keep 'em coming...
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((((((((((((((huggys))))))))))))). I love your name, my son's name is Zach as well. I also love poetry too! Good stuff! I find if I cannot speak my mind out in regular words,then poetry speaks for my soul. Welcome to SR!
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