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Old 12-20-2009, 06:50 PM
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Insomnia

I go to bed i do not sleep
I shut my eyes i do not sleep
I want to go to sleep

I watch tv i go to sleep
I go to work and fall a sleep
I want to stay awake

I shut my eyes but stay awake
the night is long withought a brake
I want to sleep

And then one day i go to bed
tuch the pillow with my head
the morrnings here
the birds in song

Why did it take so long.............................................. ......
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Old 12-20-2009, 07:12 PM
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Nicely done! I enjoyed that
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Old 12-20-2009, 07:27 PM
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Nicely done! I enjoyed that
thanks its my first atempt
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