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Old 04-24-2008, 01:58 PM
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Poem I wrote

Hi guys, Here's a poem I wrote today. I hope you enjoy. Don't worry I don't feel like this today. Just practicing my writing.

Barb


Some days really suck being sober.
I wish I could drink again.
Some days life really sucks. But we have to go on.
I wish I didn’t have responsibilities. But we all have and do.

Some days really suck being sober.
I wish I could drink again.
I wish some days that I could be a kid again. But then again I don’t.
Some days I get really tired. But I know I have to keep moving.

Some days really suck being sober.
I wish I could drink again.
I hate being a grown up and having to do things for myself.
I hate having to take care of myself. But if I don’t who will?

Some days really suck being sober.
And I don’t want to drink again.
Life will get better. I just have to have faith.

Some days really suck being sober.
But it’s still better then drunk. Things will get better.
Have patience. It works.
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Old 04-24-2008, 02:00 PM
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Nice poem scaredy .
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Thanks scaredy!
Your timing is awesome!
I just had coffee with my old drinking buddy....and I was kinda missing the "good ol' days"
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I liked it Barb! Every day in sobriety ain't perfect, but it sure beats drinking again!
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Old 04-24-2008, 02:58 PM
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thanks for sharing your poem, scaredy! keep writing! hugs, k
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By the 4th stanza, "I wish I could drink again" becomes "And I don't want to drink again", so your poem comes to a good conclusion! Those are the same things I say to myself almost every day. Barb, I feel the day will come when the thought of drinking again doesn't enter our minds, & we won't wish for those old days. Thank you for sharing your poem with us! Write more!
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I like it very much. Thank you for sharing with us!
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Old 04-26-2008, 09:00 AM
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Thanks guys. I can't believe all of this came out of my head.
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Wow scaredy, nice to see your creative side.
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very good
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