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Old 05-31-2007, 06:05 AM
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4 Kevin, and anyone else whose struggling.

I wrote this many moons ago, it doesn't make much sense and I apologise but at the time it helped me to get thru each day, take one day at a time, an hour at a time, a minute at a time..anything just to get thru.

We can't change the yesterdays, the terrible past
but we can live for the today's
we change the tomorrows.
we can leave the bas*ards behind in our thoughts
We will show them they can no longer control us
we will show them that were better then them
as we make a stand and show them were no longer scared
The scars will always be with us, but they proof that we survived.
we survived against all odds, we survived although they tried to destroy us.
We won't let the weak, sick, twisted fu*kers bring us to our knees
we will stand tall, and let them know we no longer care.
The past won't becoming with me into my future...
goodbye past, goodbye scum, goodbye....
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Old 05-31-2007, 06:28 AM
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The scars will always be with us, but they are proof that we survived.
I like this line. ((LC))
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Old 05-31-2007, 06:45 AM
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I like it too, but this one is my personal favorite:

The past won't becoming with me into my future...
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Old 05-31-2007, 07:32 AM
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mine too, abtchonamission
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Old 05-31-2007, 03:39 PM
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great poem, Little Child...the scars line is my favourite...got a few !

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Old 05-31-2007, 04:57 PM
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Yes it is very nice.
Please listen to yourself.
You have alot of insight.
You have it in you.
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Old 05-31-2007, 05:21 PM
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Right on!
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Old 05-31-2007, 05:31 PM
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amazing author. you should be published.
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Old 05-31-2007, 06:07 PM
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Old 05-31-2007, 06:44 PM
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beautifulL! I am going to take my daugher a copy this weekend. Maybe she will figure out she is not alone.
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Old 05-31-2007, 08:18 PM
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We can't change the yesterdays, the terrible past
but we can live for the today's
we change the tomorrows.

The scars will always be with us, but they proof that we survived.

past won't becoming with me into my future...


LC....

I liked those lines.

Here I put a purty pic to go with it.

Great poem..and concepts!
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Old 05-31-2007, 10:09 PM
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Great poem lost child. I needed to read that today.

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