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Old 12-31-2015, 05:07 AM
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Rolling off the tongue
a conveyor belt of lies
I told you and me

Do you believe me
telling truth I spoke not then
saying what's true now

it moved in warp speed
this assembly line of myth
cast in deepest fears

Set to the pace of
a tone in your voice or a frown
upon your sad face
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Old 12-31-2015, 10:18 AM
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it seems like time to
change my ways and habits and
get on with living
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Old 12-31-2015, 04:18 PM
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There's an icicle
Outside my bedroom window
Treacherous, it is

Sky is deepest blue
And the barnyard, an ice rink
Wind scoured powdered snow

The sun slipping down
Aurora Borealis
Set to rise tonight
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Old 01-01-2016, 04:39 AM
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Elseware, that image is beautiful:-)
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Old 01-03-2016, 04:37 PM
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A happy new year
So who knew I'd live this long
Two thousand sixteen
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Old 01-06-2016, 05:55 PM
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happy and very
busy new year for me but
i'll find time for you
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Old 01-07-2016, 09:36 AM
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"I'm a slave," I said.
"More a parasite," said she.
I'd like to thank her.
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Old 01-07-2016, 12:35 PM
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Watery sunshine
Dry and crunchy. Dirty snow
Winter trudges on

I'm cleaning closets
Poking innards and stuffings
Detritus of life
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Old 01-07-2016, 07:17 PM
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sorry about this --
an arbitrary token
arrangement of words
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Old 01-08-2016, 05:55 AM
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Excellent, Solarion!
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Old 01-08-2016, 06:03 AM
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Excellent, Solarion!
Not just excellent
But beautiful, clever and
Rather amusing
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Old 01-08-2016, 06:04 AM
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Count on your fingers
When composing a haiku?
Or is that just me?
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zero inspired me
actually all of you
with your drollery
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Old 01-08-2016, 07:55 AM
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Kind and whimsical
Zero is the king of droll
Clever and cheeky
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Old 01-08-2016, 08:54 AM
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you are all too sweet
my mind vomit is nothing
special but it is
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Old 01-09-2016, 08:06 AM
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I'm sick in the head
the gaping maw in my brain
led me to poison
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Old 01-10-2016, 10:56 AM
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i'm thinking that peace
makes me less interesting
but interested
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Old 01-14-2016, 05:01 PM
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sometimes i just want
to cry and i don't know why
maybe it's just grief
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Old 01-15-2016, 07:38 AM
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Grief is intermixed
With all life and at all times
We grieve for our death
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Old 01-15-2016, 09:27 PM
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Grief is salt wet tears
Tickling sunset sunburnt cheeks
On life's Crimson beach
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