Poem to my Husband We always said Forever we would take it to the end never give it up but this time my heart can’t mend. The mistrust cut so deep into me then my words hurt you too but when you lied again I had to say "we're through." I gave you all I had I tried to make it last but now all we have are memories from the past. So I look at me, and what I see I see a girl so broke inside who's been through some misery. And now I’m moving on with the pain that kills inside but I’m starting to forget by reminding myself, how you lied! The core of my soul has been hurt So deeply by your actions. It literally turned me off Of all other attractions. You were the one who Broke down my wall, Opened my heart to love Not just to you, but to all. You were my world or so it seemed, My life has changed My hopes, my dreams Feeling lost, confused and can't cope Just because you couldn't stay away from your own pulling rope Trying to face the world day by day Not wanting these traumatic emotions to stay I gave you everything I could give Now emotionally I can barely live Your love was it true because Your lies, mistrust and deception showed thru I'm alone, scared, hurt and don't know what to do I tried so hard. I tried my best. I gave you my all, and now there's nothing left. |
that's very beautifully written and composed. you have a very special gift, ma'am. have you written other poetry? |
Thanks AnvilheadII...although I can't take credit for all of it...just about 75 percent of it :) I researched some poetry, took a few lines, but then added my own flare to make them my own, then came up with the rest myself. I was just trying to write something to make my husband understand a bit more clearly...I hope after reading it, he will. |
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