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Old 09-13-2007, 01:30 PM
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Guess what, I'm not crazy.
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I felt the need to write and thought I would share

After All
09-13-07

I stand before you, offering this wreckage that once was my heart.
No longer beating, bleeding in my hands and on the floor.
But you don’t see it, and you can’t understand.
You don’t believe that I am leaving
and I can’t believer I let you take me to this dark place.

What was I thinking
I guess I wasn’t thinking after all.
I sacrificed my self
A useless waste of time
Some how I’ve lost my mined
No I guess I wasn’t thinking after all

It’s your addiction, I can’t change it, I can’t make it go away.
I spent so long just trying to love you but now I know the truth.
There’s nothing I can do to make it go away.
I just can’t keep on pleading
And you won’t give an inch, it’s like you don’t give a damn.

What was I thinking
I guess I wasn’t thinking after all.
I sacrificed my self
A useless waste of time
Some how I’ve lost my mined
No I guess I wasn’t thinking after all

I can’t sand here any longer, it’s your choice, do you really want to die
There’s no turning back, it’s time to make a change. I need to catch my breath
I need to give you back your life.

Maybe I’ve started thinking after all.
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Simply Awesome.........Thank You
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thanks for sharing. that was very poignant and heartfelt.

you been there, kiddo, huh? i think we all can relate to what you wrote.

hope you are thinking well, now.

march on.
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Old 09-13-2007, 03:52 PM
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Record those words into song. You will impact a helluva lot of people.
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Old 09-14-2007, 07:49 AM
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Thanks Irland, It is a song. I thought of another one last night (a country song) I have to go back in my heas because I didn't write it down but it basicly started with.
That house don't love you, and that car don't love you too. They can't keep you worm at night or make you happy when your blue. (your basic corn dog country) LOL

I have an idea for one that would be heart felt and talks about his other love. The one who consumes him, something that would make you think for sure I am talking about another woman but in the end you realize my rival for his love is a drink.
I have been thinking about that one for a long time but just haven't found the right words to make it good and still come across the way I want it to.

Hugs to everyone!
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