Poem, let me know what you think, please

Old 06-05-2005, 12:33 AM
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Poem, let me know what you think, please

My heart swells with uncontrolable love
my mouth turns upright with a smile that
lighs the night
My pride roars more loudly then the
sound of a homerunning pitch
I do all of things with the strength of
a woman.
Not just any woman you see, but THE
woman.
THE woman that taught me that time
heals all wounds
THE woman who showed me a smile
when her heart was truely breaking
THE woman that moved heaven and earth
for one person, that one person was
me.
This is a woman who no matter what we had,
or didnt have, made me feel complete
with her love.
This is a woman who told me to always fallow
my heart and never leave any stone
unturned.
This is a woman who taught me the truth will
set me free or she'll find a way too!!!
This is a woman who created another woman
who thanks her more everyday.
This is a woman who did all of this while
she was an alcoholic
AND I LOVE HER JUST THE SAME
Thanks mom for being sober for
7 years and counting

I LOVE YOU, CARRIE ANNE
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Old 06-11-2005, 11:17 AM
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Beautiful!
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Old 06-11-2005, 11:28 AM
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Lovely poem.
Lucky Mom...lucky daughter.
I'm glad you have such a wonderful woman to count among your blessings Carrie Ann.
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Old 06-11-2005, 12:36 PM
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That brought a tear to my eye, how beautiful is your love for her and how clearly you have seen the love she has always had for you. You are both blessed to have each other.

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Old 06-11-2005, 02:07 PM
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Awesome. I could almost sense a smile forming in the last few lines.
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