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12 Days of Sober

Old 12-25-2017, 10:08 AM
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Wink 12 Days of Sober

On the first day of sober
My addiction said to me
You can't leave little old me

On the second day of sober
My addiction said to me
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the third day of sober
My addiction said to me
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the fourth day of sober
My addiction said to me
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
and you can't leave little old me

On the fifth day of sober
My addiction said to me
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the sixth day of sober
My addiction said to me
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the seventh day of sober
My addiction said to me
Power is a dimming
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the eighth day of sober
My addiction said to me
I'm slowly lilting
Power is a dimming
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the ninth day of sober
My addiction said to me
I am collapsing
I'm slowly lilting
Power is a dimming
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the tenth day of sober
My addiction said to me
It's now a bleeding
I am collapsing
I'm slowly lilting
Power is a dimming
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the eleventh day of sober
My addiction said to me
I feel like dying
It's now a bleeding
I am collapsing
I'm slowly lilting
Power is a dimming
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

On the twelfth day of sober
My addiction said to me
Me you are dumping
I feel like dying
It's now a bleeding
I am collapsing
I'm slowly lilting
My power is a dimming
Jeez You are slayin' (me)
I've got you ringed
I'm calling you
Look through my lens
You are my love
And you can't leave little old me

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Old 12-25-2017, 11:40 AM
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I LOVE this!! 💗 Absolute genius FallingStars. Merry Christmas. Gabe x
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Old 12-25-2017, 12:05 PM
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Cool.
Nice job on 12.
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Old 12-25-2017, 12:23 PM
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Very cool post . . . I enjoyed that!!

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I love making up rhymes too so you've inspired me. I first thought of the obvious choice 'AV Maria' but have gone with a version of Silent Night. To follow........
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Old 12-25-2017, 12:47 PM
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Sober night, wine-free night,
my AV, wants a fight.
Here I sit and I'm not gonna crack,
I know, my friends, on SR, have my back.
I'll go to sleep without boo-ooze,
One day, at a time, you can't lose.
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Old 12-25-2017, 12:50 PM
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Originally Posted by decchemist View Post
Sober night, wine-free night,
my AV, wants a fight.
Here I sit and I'm not gonna crack,
I know, my friends, on SR, have my back.
I'll go to sleep without boo-ooze,
One day, at a time, you can't lose.
Aw Dec, I love it!! 😊👏
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Old 12-25-2017, 12:55 PM
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Very clever.
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Old 12-25-2017, 01:01 PM
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Bad King AV last got me,
In the summer season.
I was so drunk that I quit,
And with very good reason.
I realised I could not go on,
Being such a foo-l.
So I kicked him to the curb
'Begone AV you too-oo-l.'
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Old 12-25-2017, 01:27 PM
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Old 12-25-2017, 02:13 PM
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Exceptional!
and congrats on 12 Days!
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Old 12-25-2017, 03:19 PM
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Bravo for the cleverness. Humor helps.
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Old 12-25-2017, 03:32 PM
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Congrats to all you poets - great stuff

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