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Old 12-05-2014, 09:20 AM
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The Drunken Years
(my version with a nod to Dr Suess)

I cannot see
I have to pee
I cannot walk
I cannot talk
Oh my god, what can I do?

My memory stinks
My I need more drinks
No sense of smell
I look like hell
My mood is bad-can you tell?

My body's drooping
Have trouble pooping
The drunken years
have come to pass
The drunken years
can kiss my ass.
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Too funny.
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Old 12-05-2014, 09:37 AM
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Nice post Artfriend
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Old 12-05-2014, 09:45 AM
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I especially love the last verse!!!
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I especially love the last verse!!!
Me too!
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Old 12-05-2014, 10:32 AM
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Haha well done These are the little things you can really appreciate sober!
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That's awesome.

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love, love! Maybe put to music?
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Old 12-05-2014, 10:58 AM
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Great poem!
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Had a good ring to it

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Old 12-05-2014, 04:20 PM
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Any musicians out there want to put this to music?
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