A Poem That I Wrote
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A Poem That I Wrote
Although my perception has changed on my HP has changed. This is really good!
I once had a friend who treated me right
She said that she loved me but we would fight
At first we had a very special thing
With laughter, love, and a diamond ring
She made me feel as if I was a man
Then she looked again and she ran
She ran her blood into my vain
She started to take away all my pain
But when after awhile she would leave
I would have too pull up my sleeve
To find her once again in me
But she wouldn't set me free
She took control of the life that we had
The blood thickened and turned bad
Why did you turn on me so much
You were with me dinner, breakfast, and lunch
Although you would be my main course
You became my only source
Chrystal don't you still love me a little bit
Why did you have to make me feel like sh*t
Did you come to destroy my life
You took away my children and my wife
You promised that we would never end
You said my life would be only love send
But yet you turned you back on me
You brought heartache and cut down my tree
You said that I was your only one
But yet your trickery took my son
You said that no matter what would be
That you would always be good to me
Now you have me with heart and soul
You keep me on the miserable roll
Why can't you just go your way
And leave this world not tomorrow but today
Why did you turn so very bad
At first you made me so very glad
Can't you see how you have lied to him
You have kept them living in sin
You have taken a lot of things
So now I must take back that diamond ring
I have the power through my LORD today
To put you to rest and make you lay
But yet I hear your voice inside
Saying Babe Babe just one more ride
But yet one is too many and a thousand in never enough
You always did like playing ruff
So now I have a choice to make
I will throw the ring into the lake
The lake of death is in your life
No longer will I have you as wife
So thanks for the adventure down this lane
I hope to God that you never rain
For now you know how very real it feels
That love like that will actually kill
So now you have lost you power over me
For today my Lord has set me free
She said that she loved me but we would fight
At first we had a very special thing
With laughter, love, and a diamond ring
She made me feel as if I was a man
Then she looked again and she ran
She ran her blood into my vain
She started to take away all my pain
But when after awhile she would leave
I would have too pull up my sleeve
To find her once again in me
But she wouldn't set me free
She took control of the life that we had
The blood thickened and turned bad
Why did you turn on me so much
You were with me dinner, breakfast, and lunch
Although you would be my main course
You became my only source
Chrystal don't you still love me a little bit
Why did you have to make me feel like sh*t
Did you come to destroy my life
You took away my children and my wife
You promised that we would never end
You said my life would be only love send
But yet you turned you back on me
You brought heartache and cut down my tree
You said that I was your only one
But yet your trickery took my son
You said that no matter what would be
That you would always be good to me
Now you have me with heart and soul
You keep me on the miserable roll
Why can't you just go your way
And leave this world not tomorrow but today
Why did you turn so very bad
At first you made me so very glad
Can't you see how you have lied to him
You have kept them living in sin
You have taken a lot of things
So now I must take back that diamond ring
I have the power through my LORD today
To put you to rest and make you lay
But yet I hear your voice inside
Saying Babe Babe just one more ride
But yet one is too many and a thousand in never enough
You always did like playing ruff
So now I have a choice to make
I will throw the ring into the lake
The lake of death is in your life
No longer will I have you as wife
So thanks for the adventure down this lane
I hope to God that you never rain
For now you know how very real it feels
That love like that will actually kill
So now you have lost you power over me
For today my Lord has set me free
Vic....
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What a gift! I think I heard you say before that you like to write poetry. I would love to read more of yours. I am almost never in Newcomers, so would you clue me in so I don't miss such a gift?
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