I think its very good Calmwater....
I don't think any of it needs to be revised. I think its supportive, and shows belief in him, while clearly expressing your honest feelings and desire to shelter your children.
I was reading this post a bit ago.. it might be helpful to you. But again, I like what you wrote, if your happy with it, Id press "send".
http://www.soberrecovery.com/forums/...tion-pius.html