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123bubblegum123 · 04-09-2009, 08:10 AM

hey, i've never posted in here before! i just woke up from an annoying using dream, and quickly wrote this poem. any ideas for titles?

you are the time i rewrote an essay three times
only to receive a failing grade.
you are the time i was punished
for not doing anything wrong.
you are all the times
i woke up all alone.

you are all the fictional villains
rolled into one super-villain.
you are the late night call
from the drunk boy i thought i loved.
you are my misinterpretting every situation
and confidently believing "it is okay."

you are the never-ending trail of no's
preventing me from freedom.
and just so you know:
i wrote this poem backwards,
just so i would know how
the story ends.

CAPTAINZING2000 · 04-13-2009, 12:56 PM

Ball and chain

stone · 04-13-2009, 01:38 PM

"no more you" or "you"

nice poem.

JDSOBER · 04-17-2009, 03:00 PM

Hi I havent posted almost at all but here it goes : "Stranger to Me Now"

"The Stranger Within" or "Yesterday's Mirror" the last would be my favorite pick out of my own suggestions.
Thank you for sharing your poem awesome!

least · 04-20-2009, 12:31 PM

How about "Your end is my beginning"

Wonderful poem, by the way!

123bubblegum123 · 04-29-2009, 07:36 AM

such incredible title ideas!!!! thank you so much!

pearlwolf911 · 06-22-2009, 07:05 PM

"you are"
plain. simple. to the point. leading into the poem

04-09-2009, 08:10 AM	#1 (permalink)
123bubblegum123 it's a movie, you're the star Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 356	any title ideas? hey, i've never posted in here before! i just woke up from an annoying using dream, and quickly wrote this poem. any ideas for titles? you are the time i rewrote an essay three times only to receive a failing grade. you are the time i was punished for not doing anything wrong. you are all the times i woke up all alone. you are all the fictional villains rolled into one super-villain. you are the late night call from the drunk boy i thought i loved. you are my misinterpretting every situation and confidently believing "it is okay." you are the never-ending trail of no's preventing me from freedom. and just so you know: i wrote this poem backwards, just so i would know how the story ends. __________________ i'm just a little girl with big dreams.

04-13-2009, 12:56 PM	#2 (permalink)
CAPTAINZING2000 Psalm 118:24 Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: ILLINOIS Posts: 9,445 Blog Entries: 1	Ball and chain __________________ LIFE IS GOD'S GIFT TO YOU WHAT YOU DO WITH YOUR LIFE IS YOUR GIFT TO GOD J - Jesus first O - Others next Y - Yourself last John 14:6

04-13-2009, 01:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
stone Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: UK Posts: 18,303	"no more you" or "you" nice poem. __________________ . As from a fire aflame thousands of sparks come forth, even so from the Creator an infinity of beings have life and to him return again. -- Maitri Upanishads

04-20-2009, 12:31 PM	#5 (permalink)
least bona fido dog-lover Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: eastern USA Posts: 23,513 Blog Entries: 31	How about "Your end is my beginning" Wonderful poem, by the way! __________________ I'd rather live in my car with my dogs than live in a castle without them. Dogs may not be our whole lives, but they make our lives whole. Don't wait for the Last Judgement. It takes place every day. -Albert Camus Find the good and praise it. - Alex Haley

04-29-2009, 07:36 AM	#6 (permalink)
123bubblegum123 it's a movie, you're the star Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 356	such incredible title ideas!!!! thank you so much! __________________ i'm just a little girl with big dreams.

04-17-2009, 03:00 PM	#4 (permalink)
JDSOBER Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: St Louis Missouri Posts: 38 Blog Entries: 1	Hi I havent posted almost at all but here it goes : "Stranger to Me Now" "The Stranger Within" or "Yesterday's Mirror" the last would be my favorite pick out of my own suggestions. Thank you for sharing your poem awesome!

06-22-2009, 07:05 PM	#7 (permalink)
pearlwolf911 Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 25 Blog Entries: 9	"you are" plain. simple. to the point. leading into the poem

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