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Old 08-14-2015, 08:13 AM
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I write poems, during insomnia. heres one

Waves crash; water trickles against my feet.
Looking at the ocean, its a lot like me.
One minute, peaceful and calm.
Weather changes; dark, crashing,clouds cover above.

As night falls, even the most dim star shines in darkness.
A flicker of hope and beauty,
On this bad night; the star is still there.

The sand beneath me is soft,
Can't help but wonder;
If I will sink forever.
Sink with my thoughts;
Stop breathing but be at peace.

My SOUL is the ocean,
My THOUGHTS are the night.
My HEART is the star;

Sinking beneath the dark, soft sand...
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Old 08-14-2015, 10:19 AM
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Thanks for sharing Sister!!
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Old 08-18-2015, 12:46 AM
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Beautiful you seem to have a knack for this
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Old 08-18-2015, 02:44 AM
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Touching and very meaningful. Thank you for sharing!
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Old 08-18-2015, 03:25 AM
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That was lovely. thank you for sharing with us
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Old 08-19-2015, 07:43 AM
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Thanks for your replies. I use to write about 10yrs ago. Seems to help when I'm down 😊
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