Good Writing Aldo
I like it......the subtleties and nuances of the changes you made make the song have more sense to it in my opinion.....Manson is a great artist, but can be a bit sterile with the lyrics.....you brought a sense of personality to the song, good job Aldo....
Sorry to have taken so long, i didn't notice this thread had a second page till just now. You can prose in my thread anythime you like Aldo....you are very good at it indeed, thank you for sharing your talent i really appreciate it. I do death metal and rock vocals as well as badly play guitar....maybe someday we can jam eh? That would be cool.
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I can't help the feeling.
I could blow through the ceiling.
If i could just turn and run.
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